Embrace the (white) space
I was collaborating with a designer on a particularly tricky product page recently. We had wrestled with text length and treatment in the hero image, trying to find a balance between saying what we needed to say (content strategy) and a compelling visual (design) and an easy, intuitive path for the reader (user experience). Needless to say, there was plenty of back and forth.
Finally, we wrangled that section into submission and the designer began working on the rest of the page — a simple, streamlined summary of product benefits. About an hour later, I got an email:
“Hey, there’s a lot of blank space left on items 3 and 4. Can you pad it out with some extra copy?”
If there’s one drum I’m constantly pounding, it’s this: Write what you need — and no more. No padding. No filler. No extra words just to take up space. Trust me on this — your audience doesn’t need the extra verbiage. Just tell them what they need to know, and move on.
And if that leaves some white space on a page? So be it. Believe it or not, the reader’s eye might actually welcome the rest. Think I’m just a cranky writer with no flair for design? Well, think again, smartypants; Web designers have long known that white space can be a secret weapon.
For example, the Web Design Ledger opines: “There are a number of elements that make up a great web design, but probably one of the most overlooked and underutilized is whitespace. Every design has whitespace, but the problem is that not every design has enough.” (Whitespace: The Underutilized Design Element)
Mark Boulton of A List Apart notes: “Designers use whitespace to create a feeling of sophistication and elegance for upscale brands. Coupled with a sensitive use of typography and photography, generous whitespace is seen all over luxury markets.” (Whitespace)
And from I’d Rather Be Writing, this gem: “White space also has an interesting paradox surrounding it: The absence of graphics and text plays a significant role in increasing comprehension of the text and of focusing attention on graphics. The absence of content is what draws the eye towards content.” (The Paradox of White Space: Some Research and Examples of White Space in Web Design)
To all of these folks I say, amen. It’s time to embrace the space.
(And by the way, in the example above, the design director agreed with me — no padding necessary. And we ended up having a happy page with plenty of relaxing white space.)